19 October 2019 | Featured speaker Nancy Ellen Dodd | Writing Dialogue
Would you like to learn how to write better dialog that is authentic to your characters? You will have the opportunity to sharpen this skill at the Writers of Kern monthly meeting on October 19th. Author and screenwriter Nancy Ellen Dodd will walk us through the process in a fun and highly interactive workshop.
Nancy is inviting participants to volunteer dialog they have written for their own stories, for use in this presentation. Fear not! This won’t be a critiquing exercise, but is intended to be fun and engaging. It’s a great opportunity to receive feedback relevant to what you are writing! And you will come away knowing how to give your dialog greater impact and make your story more powerful.
If you choose to share, here are Nancy’s instructions:
- Please email one double-spaced page of dialogue from your story. This could include a (conversation between two people or a monologue).
- On that one page, please include a brief description of your character/s
- State permission to use your page as an example in the PowerPoint presentation.
- From these submissions, examples will be chosen that best illustrate what is being taught. This will be a friendly and positive teaching/learning experience, it’s not about critiquing, but rather about adding a new layer to your writing skills.
Email: [email protected] – in the subject line write “WOK Dialogue”.
Ms. Dodd offers us a wealth of experience. In addition to holding a MPW (Master’s in professional writing) and an MFA (in playwriting) from USC, Nancy is currently earning her Ph.D. in Global Leadership and Change focusing on the impact of storytelling. She teaches advanced screenwriting at Seaver College, Pepperdine. She is the author of over 130 articles and has recently published a book, The Writer’s Compass: From Story Map to Finished Draft in 7 Stages (Writer’s Digest).
Don’t miss this! Click here to pay the meeting fee online.
To learn more about Nancy, check out her blog at http://www.thewriterscompass.com/
Meet a Member | Rossely Harman
An Interview with Rossely Harman by Natalia Corres
Depending on the time and place that you meet Rossely Harman, you might know her as a Criminal Lawyer or a Playwright or an Actress or an Author or a Screenwriter or as a Dominican-American or even as a Mother-to-be. She is all of these, and I suspect there are even more roles she manages in her daily life. She is also an active member of Writers of Kern!
Rossely always loved acting and writing as she was growing up. Her undergraduate degree was in English Literature as she read and absorbed the basic tools for every good writer; learning from the works done by other good and great writers. She went on to a certification program at UCLA for Screenwriting and from there she immersed herself in the Law at Northwestern University.
The program at Northwestern was grueling – and when asked what wisdom she might impart to her younger self if she could go back in time, her answer was this: “Don’t forget that your first love is acting and writing – MAKE the time to do these things! Don’t stifle your creative side.”
She went on to become a criminal lawyer, which she still practices today. And she eventually made the time to pursue her first love with a passion! Her play “The Dark Creature” was voted the best showcased at the “Hear Her Call Caribbean- American Women’s Theater Festival” in New York this past March. She also won the Audience Choice award at that festival. You can see “The Dark Creature” on Youtube by clicking here and see her introduction video here.
Rossely describes herself as a writer of dark themes with strong elements of horror, yet one of her most exciting accomplishments was a play about Pancho Barnes (an aviatrix in history), which was a comedy. She admits she was slightly intimidated to attempt comedy, and it was definitely out of her comfort zone, but the results were thrilling for her. The elation she experienced from that “leap into the unknown” was amazing as she witnessed the performance and experienced the laughter and the audience’s response to her work. She was exhilarated. She hopes to have all of her plays available online for all to see and experience soon.
Recently she has been working on filming a short that she wrote and is acting in. She is also currently working on two feature length films and a pilot for a television series. All this and still working as a criminal lawyer and due to have her first child in October.
The films have been incubating in her mind for years. One explores the dynamic of racism in the Caribbean, an area where many races were thrown together – many involuntarily; the other film is a children’s story meant to be comedic and animated. The television pilot deals with human trafficking, is based on a real life story and will have her signature horror elements incorporated into the story line. Her projects usually include Latina women or children, challenging us to see these people in a different light, and to understand the circumstances they are in and have been in – the events that make them who they are – to see that they survive tragedy and emerge empowered.
When asked about how her career as a lawyer has affected her career as a writer, she answered “I think it has made me a smarter writer, a more logical storyteller. Yes, I have been inspired by some of the situations I am exposed to as a lawyer, and also some of the people I see. Study and analysis is part of what I do in both areas of my life – practicing the law or creating a story. “
What else does Rossely want us to know about her?
She says she is a passionate person. She loves people and collaborating with others excites her, as does being a part of a group (like Writers of Kern) that is creative, too! She is both energized and exhausted when writing, and knows that there is a lot of failure in trying new things, but loads to learn that way, too. And when you have a lot to say to the world, you take the risks, make the leaps, and sometimes you get to the thrilling part of seeing your work interpreted and performed by people who understand it differently, giving it new layers of meaning.
Writers of Kern is happy to know you! And we are cheering you in the wings, Rossely!
Write Now | August 2019 Entries
The August “Write Now” contest was to submit: 50-word story about a “Back to school” memory. We had some very creative submissions! So here they all are for your reading pleasure:
The small high school orientation was quiet. Mom’s stomach growled loudly. I snickered. She chuckled. Chortles commenced until we couldn’t catch our breath. Tears. The other students and parents tried to ignore our uncontrollable laughter. Counselor, Mrs. Hagadorn, smiled uneasily, “Did I say something funny?” We could only mouth, “No.”
~ Pam Reeves
A physical education teacher on maternity leave, I returned after Christmas vacation, taking over a 3rd grade classroom. Thirty-three students greeted me, “Where’s Mrs. R?” I had no answers but called the roll and noticed the kid labeled “a runner” sidling toward the door. I beat her to it.
~ Annis Cassells
Reminiscing About College by Shelley Evans
After my marriage, I went back to school
Thinking a college degree would be cool.
English was a piece of cake, so to speak;
Art was my favorite – I was an art freak!
In drawing and painting I did fairly well,
But sculpting clay was the very best of all.
Frankly by Julie Bonderov
It’s been 50 years since I wore my first pair of glasses. Walking into my fifth-grade classroom on the first day of school, I heard, “Look at the one in the glasses!” I still remember the boy’s name who said it. His name was Frank.
Back To School- Circa 1980 By Anita Collins
Aqua Net hairspray sales were through the roof. School ID cards and class schedules were mailed out weeks ago and tucked firmly in our Pee Chee folders. Don’t forget to memorize your new locker combination. See yah in home-room! Yeah, this is going to be our year!
Open Submissions of Poetry/Essays for the International Day of Peace
The International Day of Peace was started by the United Nations in 1981. Since then, the day “is observed around the world each year on September 21. The Peace Day provides a globally shared date for all humanity to commit to Peace above all differences and to contribute to building a Culture of Peace.”
The local planning committee invites you to write personal essays and/or poems addressing the issue of peace.
The chosen submissions will be entered into a collaborative notebook available on the Day of Peace, September 21, 2019 (10 am to 12 am in Central Park, Bakersfield). The collaboration will then be published online at https://kernpoetry.com
One poem will be selected to be read from the stage. The poem should last no longer than 3 minutes when read aloud. All pieces will be entered into the electronic book.
How to Submit
#1 Format you work
- 12 pt Times New Roman font
- 1″ margins, all sides
- Document file in MS Word
#2 Email your submission
- Enter “Submission for Day of Peace” in the subject line
- Send as an attachment
- Send it to [email protected]
#3 All submissions should be received by September 18, 2019
Note: Email submissions only. All other submissions will be rejected.